Watch where you go

My response to HBATNAGAR’s Two Phrase Story #29 – first seen on Elusive Trope’s blog

The premise is simple. HBATNAGAR provides one phrase every Thursday, an incomplete string of words, and it is up to you to complete it in your own, inimitable way. However you like, taking it in any direction you want.

If you like the concept, please play along and post the complete challenge on your blog and leave a link in the comments section below.

I love the mental exercise, I hope you do too!

This week’s phrase –

‘His feet touched the icy floor…’

My attempt

‘…where cracks zig-zagged, threatening to open and swallow him whole.’

Your turn!