My response to Carpe Diem Special #215 Jack Kerouac’s “white clouds”, where Chèvrefeuille has shared two more beautiful yet somewhat strange haiku by Kerouac to inspire us to create a new haiku, with the aim of capturing the spirit of Kerouac:
White clouds of this steamy planet
obstruct
My vision of the blue void
White rose with red
splashes – Oh
Vanilla ice cream cherry!
© Jack Kerouac
My inspired haiku are as follows:
Density of city smog
obfuscates
night-time extravaganza
Pink and yellow
summer honeysuckle – sweet
scented lollipops!
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

you captured Kerouac’s style brilliant!!!
much love…
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Thanks and much love back!
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