not a whispering
or a rustling in the leaves
but a symphony
of senses: smells and colours
proclaim the end of the year
Kim M. Russell, 2016
My response to Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #29 autumn’s voice
In this penultimate episode of the Tanka Splendor month, the prompt is autumn’s voice, in which the challenge is to create tanka in which we listen to autumn’s voice: the tough wind, the rustling of the fallen leaves, the hard smashing rains, the sound of birds on their way to warmer places and more.
just the wind
the rustling of fallen leaves
and the soft rain
together with the one I love
I discover the voice of autumn
© Chèvrefeuille
writing in north norfolk 
A beautiful tanka Kim, I love your ‘symphony of the senses’💖
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I’ve found the trashed comment and restored it! Thank you, Xenia!
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So glad you have found it again! You are very welcome Kim, have a blessed rest of the day xxx
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A superb autumn tanka ! Very inspired as always !
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Thank you, Virginia!
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Got the windows open today. 🙂
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We had quite a heavy frost this morning so our windows are firmly shut. But I’ve enjoyed looking out. 😊
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Beautifully done
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Thank you! 😊
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Marvelous! 🌹
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Thank you, Dorna!
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