ancient warriors ghosts
mists over the foreign highlands –
waiting for the full moon © Chèvrefeuille
graveyards become battlefields
watered by the tears of stars

in the fields
with ripe rice plants for the Gods
the sickle is used . . . © Takezaki Shisen
slowly waxing sickle moon
forecasts satisfied bellies

white poppy
it must have bloomed
from a wintry shower © Basho
its seeds are icy snowflakes
silvered by the waning moon

Kim M. Russell, 2017
My response to Carpe Diem #1337 Tan Renga Challenge “in the fields”
Today we have a Tan Renga Challenge, in which a short chained poem called a tan renga is written by two poets. The first poet provides the ‘hokku’ (starting verse), while the other poet adds a second stanza of two lines, making it look similar to a tanka.
Chèvrefeuille has chosen three haiku from which we can create our tan renga; we may use one, two or all three.
Beautiful Tan Renga in all of them, Kim!
Hank
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Thank you, Hank!
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kaykuala
Especially like the response to Basho!
Hank
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Reblogged this on Wrote A Book…And Then… and commented:
When auhors work in tandem, without ego, witout regard of self, where onl the craft is considetef, beauty arises.
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Thank you for the reblog!
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Of course. We scribling siblings always have to stick together!
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I like the tie in with the sickle moon..
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Wonderful … all three completions are really nicely crafted.
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Thank you, Kristjaan!
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