When the whole world measured time
in light and dark, descent and climb,
civilisation was still new
my child, an infant just like you.
One drab June, we wandered ancient grounds,
round rain-soaked prehistoric mounds,
counting a nursery rhyme of stones.
We imagined thousands of dawns
and shadows pierced by shafts of light –
the zenith reached on midsummer night.
the solstice cycle
freewheels through hot summer days
brakes into darkness
Kim M. Russell, 21st June 2018
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Meeting the Bar: Couplets for the Solstice
Today is the summer solstice and Frank would like us to write couplets for the solstice, which links back to a similar prompt from 2011 by Gay Reiser Cannon.
Frank reminds us that it’s that time of year again, when the Sun’s trending to either its highest or its lowest position in the sky is achieved and then the trend will reverse: long days will become shorter; shorter nights will become longer – or the opposite depending on where we are on the Earth.
Frank says that day and night, two things interacting with each other, remind him of couplets, a very common and simple poetic form.
So our challenge today is to write one or more couplets optionally about the solstice. I’ve taken some old poems and reworked them into a couplet haibun.
Those stone structures measuring the midsummer make us realize how deep into the past our humanity goes. I like how you described the solstice cycle as freewheeling.
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Thanks Frank.
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This is the best history lesson in the world! The imagery of shafts of light and a freewheeling sun makes it even more special.
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Thank you, Viv!
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Beautiful poem, such lovely word choice.
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Thank you, Sascha.
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Brilliant synthesis of lyrical couplets with the haibun form, Kim! 🙂
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Thank you, Frank! 🙂
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Those ancient grounds do remind us of years and years of dawns and sunsets ~ Specially adore your haiku of the solstice cycle Kim ~
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Cheers Grace!
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I love your reference to Stonehenge and the light of a thousand dawns! Breaking into darkness!!
Dwight
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Excellent take!
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Thank you, Reena!
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“counting a nursery rhyme of stones.” Bravo such an excellent craft of words.
Happy you dropped by to read mine Kim
Much💞love
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I really like the flow of this. You have captured the movement of time. My favorite lines,
“When the whole world measured time
in light and dark, descent and climb,”
Nicely done.
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Thank you, Ali.
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One drab June, we wandered ancient grounds,
round rain-soaked prehistoric mounds,
counting a nursery rhyme of stones.
We imagined thousands of dawns
Such is the draw of Stonehenge to welcome thousands annually despite perhaps being drab for the day
Hank
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Fascinating place for poetry!
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I like your reworking of the haibun! I think it’s better as couplets, but then that wouldn’t be kosher, would it?
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #8: Kim M. Russell’s poetic #haibun for #dversepoets!
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Thank you so much for the reblog, Frank!
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I love the way you put the solstice into those ancient stones… there is a story going back into every one of us.
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