path of the sun
the hollyhock leans into
early summer rain
gathering between petals
a pool of drowning pollen
summer rain
where the poem card peeled off
a mark on the wall
distant memory of words
imprinted in a damp smudge
don’t be like me
even though we’re like the melon
split in two
we fit together sweetly
self-contained with juiciness
wait awhile
cut the soy beans to the sound
of monks beating bowls
hunger enhances flavour
when there’s no money for spice
building a bridge
between snow-covered mountains
white egrets
feathers and snowflakes mingle
a silent blanket of white
plovers fly away
the evening grows later with
cold mountain winds
the moon’s a blustery kite
with a tail of ice and stars
Matsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold) Kim M. Russell, 25/09/2018

My response to Carpe Diem Renga With Basho #9 A Mark On The Wall
In a new episode of Carpe Diem’s special feature ‘Renga With Basho’, we are creating renga with a given selection of haiku by Matsuo Basho. The line-up is own choice, to which we add two-line stanzas with approximately 14 syllables to create a closed chain, ending with an ‘ageku’. The haiku have been taken from Jane Reichhold’s Basho, The Complete Haiku.
Beautifully done.
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Thank you!
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Superb series of Spectacularness! (@–>–) (@–>–)
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Thanks Dorna! 😊
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Beautifully done. 🙂
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Thank you. 😊
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“wait awhile
cut the soy beans to the sound
of monks beating bowls
hunger enhances flavour
when there’s no money for spice”
My favourite.
Well done Kim
Much❤🕊love
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Thank you, Gillena, and much love to you. I’m just about catching up with my reading after visiting Oxford last week.
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A wonderfully crafted renga. With your stanza you honor the master.
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Thank you, Kristjaan.
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