naive lovers’ souls
orbiting in the unknown
two moons face to face
Kim M. Russell, 25th October 2018

My response to Carpe Diem’s Autumn Retreat 2018 Love Eternally
It’s time for Carpe Diem’s Autumn Retreat, a period of 30 days to write haiku or tanka every day on a specific theme: ‘love eternally’.
beautiful
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Thank you!
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oh brilliant! I love the comparison of innocence to the moon – adds a frisson of silver-esque delight to “purity” and “naiveté” … and that second line is stellar – 🌠 – and the complete haiku is just gorgeously delicious Kim! wow – love it 😀
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Thank you for your lovely comments, Pat. 🙂
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Naive hmm so true
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