When I was about nineteen and living in Cologne, after repeated ferocious tonsillitis my tonsils were finally removed. A hike in the Moselle Valley had been planned by some male friends of mine and they insisted I come along, post-operative or not.
It was late autumn, frosty and cold. The ancient hotel we were staying in had opened just for us; one of the lads knew the owner. The heating wasn’t working, the bedclothes were freezing, and my breath hung in the air, probably even after I’d fallen asleep.
But the scenery was worth it. We scrumped apples in seemingly forgotten orchards, crossed streams via steppingstones, got lost in a misty forest, ate crusty rolls (baked by the hotelier) with local cheese, and drank Moselle wine. I was the only girl and struggled to keep up with the rest of the group, but they politely waited for me to catch up, pointing out everything they thought might interest me, and constantly asking if my throat was sore. I hadn’t noticed.
hiking through the past
frozen in a forest stream
a tossed apple core
Kim M. Russell, 31st September 2020
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Haibun Monday: Take a Hike!
This Monday, Frank invites us to take a hike. He says that he and his family are avid hikers. He has also found poems to give us hiking inspiration. Whether we enjoy hiking or not, or if the word reminds us of tax hikes or hikes in some kind of rate or cost, we are writing haibun in which we use the word ‘hike’, alluding to whatever context we find most meaningful.
This sounds like a wonderful memory… a late autumn walk is something so special… I must remember to do such things and bring some homebaked rolls…
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Thank you, Bjorn. It was very cold but the food and wine were excellent.
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“scrumped” –what a great word!
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We used to scrump in the vicar’s orchard when I was a child – we used to get into so much trouble because we had to climb over the wall to reach the apples.
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Aww, this sounds so lovely. It indeed sounds like a wonderful memory, and you describe it with beautiful prose in visceral imagery. Astounding work. I enjoyed reading your take on the prompt!
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Thank you, Lucy! 😉
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I love all of this, Kim. You paint a picture of such bright, sharp colours without even using them.
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Thank you so much, Jane. Sadly, most of my memories from my teenage years are disappearing, together with the language..
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You need to get off to Germany again.
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No more travelling for me, Jane.
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I would like to revisit some places where I have fond memories but I don’t have any money, so that’s me let off the hook 🙂
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Isn’t it amazing how the hiking experience can so captivate us? Well done, Kim! 🙂
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Thanks Frank! 😊
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See what care and a good hike can do. Lovely that this adventure turned out to be part of the healing process
Happy Monday
Much✏love
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Thank you, Gillena, and much love.
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Three grand hikes in a row out here on the trail; yours is a lovely companion; deliciously descriptive. You scored a lot of points with the boys, I’m sure.
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Thank you, Glenn.
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a most memorable hike indeed, sounds like nice lads!
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Thank you, Kate. They were lovely lads.
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Kim, I love how you described your experience. In my overactive imagination it sounds like a perfect place for a horror movie lol
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Thank you, Lisa. I did have a few misgivings, the hotel was really old, dark and creaky.
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You’re welcome.
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Yeah, but….Post-Op? Really? No, thanks. And no heat? Yikes. Call me a cab.
You tell it great, though, KR! Thanks
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You’re a cab, Ron!v I was nineteen and up for adventure. It was worth it for the scenery and food.
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What a great memory to have. And great friends!
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Thank you, Mary!
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Thank you for taking us back in time on your amazing journey 😊 Makes me long for fall and crisp apples.
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Thanks for joining me, Sue! 😉
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This was dazzling Kim! Thank you for sharing this wonderful adventure… 🙂
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Thank you, Rob! 🙂
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Thank you for the memory. (With those details, I almost made it my own)
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Thanks for reading and coming along for the hike.
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That was a brave hike for you! Oh, for the carefree days when we thought we were invincible! Well done Kim!
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Thank you, Dwight. They were indeed carefree days. I couldn’t do it now.
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Great memories!
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‘Scrumped’ is solely for apples? I can remember ‘scrumping’ for conkers from the laird’s ancient tree. Lovely piece of writing – transporting and evocative – and what chivalrous travelling companions you had.
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Thank you, Peter. Scrumping can be used for the stealing of any fruit!
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Your ending lines matched the youthful adventure of this hiking memory. Aren’t you glad to have this memory forever? I count myself very lucky for the travel memories that are mine.
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Thank you, Ali. It’s one I had kept at the back of my mind. The recent death of a very old friend in Germany reminded me of it and the prompt helped coax it out. I have so many memories of my eight years in Cologne.
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Kim,
Sometimes a prompt can be the perfect invitation to bring forth a memory so that we can enjoy it all over again.
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I adore your haibun and the apple core ending.
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Thank you so much!
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Thank you for taking us along on your magical hiking adventure. I love how you describe how your breath hung in the air, probably even after you’d fallen asleep. When you talked about struggling to keep up with the men, I thought you meant with the wine drinking at first (I’ve been there!) But I’m pleased they were so gentlemanly, waiting for you and asking after your health!
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Thanks for joining me, Ingrid. I only knew one of them well but they were all very attentive. It was so cold there, with such beautiful scenery, an d the food was amazing, although after a day’s hike everything tasted delicious.
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Oh yeah! We’ve done the Moselle several times (starting from NE France right up to the Rhine). Autumn is a perfect time of year to do it also – fewer tourists.
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This sounds so wonderful. I bet you look back on it with lots of pleasure. It’s great to be young and adventurous – and resilient. I’ve only been to Bavaria, but I enjoyed Germany very much.
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I was there for eight years and would have stayed if I hadn’t been pregnant and my husband wanted to move back to Ireland.
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I am right there with you Kim….except for the sore throat! How special of these male friends to take you on a hike. I liked the description of the hotel….I can imagine it being so chilly. The best part of the description you’ve given, for me, is the crusty bread and cheese and wine — sharing this meal with these friends who went out of their way to provide you with a hike and day that is obviously seared in your memory. I enjoyed this very much! If you still know these young men, you should share this with them! 🙂
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It sounds like such a special trip–and memory. Your male friends sound so kind. I like your haiku “hiking through the past.” That’s just what you did, and you took us along with you!
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Thank you, Merril!
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