I don’t play video games.
My husband does and,
sometimes, I watch, suspended
in my space,
while he controls the action in his.
In Silent Hill, we shared
the eerie corridors, the abandoned
fairground,
the empty streets of a ghost town.
We searched with the protagonist
for his missing daughter, avoided
or killed zombies that roamed,
and were terrified
when the phone rang
in an empty shopping mall
and the caller was
the lost child.
On the threshold
of new technology
leading to
new worlds,
was never quite there,
I never had control —
it was always out of my hands,
out of my comfort zone.
Kim M. Russell, 20th June 2024
I missed Dora’s Poetry in Liminal Spaces Poetics prompt at the dVerse Poets Pub last week, as I was away, but I’m taking the opportunity to write a poem to it .
I love the William Blake quote with which Dora opened her prompt and which gave me the title for my poem. I also enjoyed Tawada Yōko’s exploration of temporary comradery with men in the liminal space of a train platform in an excerpt from his poem ‘Cigarette’, as well as the idea of the poet’s relation to the liminal in Denis Johnson’s ‘Now’, both of which made me think of the liminal space of a video game.
I don’t play video games, either. That sounds like a game I don’t want to play. Eerie little poem, Kim!
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My favourite is by far The Last of Us, and I loved the Netflix series,
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I have never even witnessed a video game..even more out of it than you!!
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Kirby’s Dream Buffet and Rocket League are more my speed.😄
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I don’t know them. My husband only plays games with puzzles to solve, with Gothic undertones, or with zombies! Our favourite is by far The Last of Us.
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Oh, I like this eerie poem. I think it would also work expanded into a story.
I don’t play games either.
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Thank you, Merril!
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You’re very welcome, Kim!
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Love the liminal spaces in this poem, your own as you watch the gameplay cocooned from the action, the game’s own gothic environment and the threshold of technology that creates such a space.. All transfixing in their own way, awaiting movement, awaiting the next zombie around the corner, the next advance in gameplay— this intermediate space. I’ve been in the same position as you, Kim, watching someone else play “Silent Hill” and it is decidedly unsettling. I love your take on the prompt! 😊
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Thank you, Dora. The Last of Us has become our all time favourite.
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May I ask — What exact title and what console? Was it a remake of the game on Xbox or PS5?
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Silent Hill was on PS3 and The Last of Us on PS4.
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Thank you for letting me know! Very atmospheric writing and visuals!
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