I wrote this after seeing one on Daniel Schwamm’s blog.
Dispersion
Early sun leaks through
A hole in a tilted tree
Dispersing the fog
…
Early sun leaks through
Gilding the morning shadows
With luminescence
…
A hole in a tilted tree
A kaleidoscope
Of shifting colours
…
Dispersing the fog
Washing wisps of gossamer
From a newborn day

What a delightful start in troiku! Love your imagery and word choice 🙂 Especially the “early sun leaks through” and the hole acting as a kaleidoscope. Marvelous!
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Thank you Daniel 🙂
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I love it. Never tried a Troiku. You’ve inspired me!
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Thank you, but the I got the idea from Daniel Schwamm and a website called Carpe Diem Haiku Kai, where it is explained in more detail.
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I am a frequent poster at Carpe Diem but your poem still inspired me! 🙂
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