Behind bare branches
All the boats are safely moored
Winter has arrived
©Kim M. Russell, 2015
I have revised this haiku following a suggestion from a WordPress friend!
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Suggestion (if I may be so bold) if you removed ‘up’ (as I t serves little or no useful purpose) you would have another syllable available. Think of the use that free syllable could be put to. Go on, you know that you want to. G:)
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I’m working on it!
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When a haiku is
to be more precise, you see;
Lose the fluffity.
G:)
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Hello Kim! Long time, no see! Hope you’re well 🙂
Jen
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