My response to the secret keeper’s Weekly Writing Prompt #19
Unwavering rain
Typical of the season
Gives me good reason
To break a resolution
Stay inside with poetry
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

My response to the secret keeper’s Weekly Writing Prompt #19
Unwavering rain
Typical of the season
Gives me good reason
To break a resolution
Stay inside with poetry
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

This was really smooth and it flows perfectly. Really good!
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Nicely written – if one has to break a resolution, the best way to do so .. a really lovely illustration too …
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LOL and my resolution was to write more. Looks like we both won on this rainy day.
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Terrific Tanka with nice flow & significant meaning. I could relate.
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Thank you 🙂
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A great resolution. Write or read poetry. Moments of inspirations. Loved your poem. I could feel the rain down on me and hear the sounds hitting against the pavement. 5 words fit well in your tanka. A wonderful poem. The senses were awakened. – jk
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