Angles in Tangles

I have deconstructed an old poem as a response to Carpe Diem Theme Week 3: Magnolia Blossoms, haiku by Soseki Natsume; episode 5 leafless tree

 

there are triangles

in the bare branches of trees

angles in tangles

 

sharpness smoothed by light

tracing ghostly foliage

smoothing the edges

 

© Kim M. Russell, 2016

Angles in the Tangles

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