My response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille May 4th 2016

kishadoo no ichidan takaki fuyuta kana
Winter rice fields–
railroad tracks running
a level above them © Shiki
children play in fields below
leaving tracks across the snow © Kim M. Russell, 2016
I love this image!! as a young teen we used to cross a bridge of tracks only for trains of course and we knew no trains passed in mid afternoon…yep, I was scared nonetheless
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We had a bridge across train tracks near our home too! We used to stand on the bridge and watch the trains go through. The noise was terrifying and thrilling at the same time!
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Lived by the train tracks for years…shunting and thundering bang bang at night too.
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Playful use of tracks. BTW, congrats on your latest poem being published.
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Thank you for your kind congratulations 🙂
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Beautiful!!
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