Willow in the Rain (reprise)

My response to Carpe Diem #992 Willow – I have taken one of the first poems I posted last year, deconstructed it and turned it into a tanka.


a bothersome breeze

buffets the willow bending

with the weight of tears,

holding up anaemic clouds

above our soggy garden


© Kim M. Russell, 2016

Deer under the willow tree



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