new candle flickers
draughts entangle wisps of smoke
capturing shadows
old candle flares up
in a pool of molten wax
final performance
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

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My response to Carpe Diem #1062 Candles
Today our prompt is candles and it’s taken from Jane’s “A Dictionary of Haiku” (the printed version). Chèvrefeuille has shared two haiku by Yosa Buson (1716-1784):
shokunohiwo shokuni utsusuya harunoyuu
one candle
gives its light to another –
spring evening
© Yosa Buson (Tr. Chèvrefeuille)
teshokushite iro ushinaeru kigikukana
in the light from the candle held
their color lost–
yellow chrysanthemums
© Yosa Buson (Tr. William R. Nelson)
As well as examples by Jane Reichhold:
lighting a candle
the moon slips away
in a smoky cloud
replacing the candle
the full moon comes
in the window
moonset
into the dawn burns
a candle
© Jane Reichhold
Some days lately I think I’m the old candle. One last flicker….
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