silent steps –
one more candle illuminates
the old chapel © Ese
dancing shadows disappear
banished by the growing flames Kim M. Russell, 2017
lighting one candle
with another candle
an evening in spring © Buson (Tr. unknown)
smoke mingles with sweet perfume
of drifting cherry blossoms Kim M. Russell, 2017

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My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge 2017 #5 silent steps
Chèvrefeuille has reminded us that this month we are busy with our second CDHK Tan Renga Challenge and today he has chosen a modern haiku by Ese Klava, with which she became the ‘runner-up’ of the ‘prayers’ kukai.
He has also shared a haiku by Buson, from which he suggests we could also try to create a Tan Renga.
The goal of the Tan Renga Challenge is to add our two-line 2nd stanza to the ‘hokku’.
Love these, especially the second.
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Thanks Rosemary!
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Nice Kim
much love…
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Thank you and much love back, Gillena!
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Excellent! Brilliant! 🌹🌹🌹😎
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