fits like a comfortable pair of shoes.
I wander meandering alleys
of what was once England’s second largest city,
flanked by half-timbered shops and houses,
from Tombland to the market place.
I totter sea-sick among neat rows of sweet-wrapper stalls,
up ancient steps to the bookends of castle and cathedral;
along the river, where boats and swans compete;
up the steep hill to Mousehold Heath. I remove my shoes,
feel grass and earth beneath my feet,
and take in the familiar view.
The evening sun dips deeply,
bathing the Norwich skyline in ethereal fire
and setting light to the cathedral’s spire.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to dVerse Poets Pub Poetics: ‘Urban Renewal’, also linked to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Tuesday Platform
This week we have a guest host from Orlando, Florida, home to Disney World, palm trees, and Jilly, who says that not all of us live in cities; some live in towns, medium or small, while others live in villages or hamlets. Many people, including me, reside in the country, a place demarcated by simple crossroads, but close enough to a city to visit occasionally.
Jilly would like us to write about a city, town or village that inspires us: the places where we live right now or places from our past; maybe cities or towns we would like to visit or live. The places could be real or imaginary; they could be our hometowns that no longer look like they did in our childhood memories. She has given us some inspiration in a poem, ‘Chicago’ by Carl Sandburg, and song by Huey Lewis and the News.
I took an old poem and re-worked it.
Beautiful pictures, Kim! Your poem takes us on a journey and I felt breathless as I climbed with you. Great descriptors of the scenes and the feel of your city. Glad you reworked this one – terrific!
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Thanks Jill!
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Beautiful description of Norwich.
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Thank you!
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That was a very pleasant tour of Norwich you took me on! I loved the feeling of rising up through the city, and finally getting that view.
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Thanks Sarah. I’m off to bed now – my eyes are giving up on me – I’ll be back in the morning with brighter ones.
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Beautiful images – both your photos and in your poem!
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Thank you, Jo!
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What a beautiful scene you have described in your lovely poem….and then the photos after are an absolute joy. Wow!
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Thank you, Sherry.
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I imagine the evening sun on the cathedral spire is beautiful.
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“I totter sea-sick among neat rows of sweet-wrapper stalls” — wonderful!
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Thank you!
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It sounds and looks so lovely. I loved the English cities when I visited in 1998, but didn’t get to this one, sadly. Thanks for recreating it for me here.
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Norwich is on a par with York, I think. They both have medieval walls and buildings, and they were both settled by the Anglo Saxons. Lots of history.
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What a Marvelous adventure. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀
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Thank you, Dorna!
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What a beautiful city described beautifully. I truly enjoyed the place where the shoes come off. Best part of any city!
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Thank you, Charley!
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I love to meander around your city Kim ~ Love the photos specially the stunning sunset:
The evening sun dips deeply,
bathing the Norwich skyline in ethereal fire
and setting light to the cathedral’s spire.
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Thank you, Grace.. It’s easy to find your way around and to fall in love with Norwich. And it’s England’s first city of literature!
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Rich with beautiful imagery.you have taken us by the hand to Norwich. Truly lovely writing Kim!
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Thank you, Carrie!
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You have described you city so well. …All the way from tombland to market place!
dwight
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Tombland is the name of the area around the cathedral, which was once an Anglo-Saxon market place. It has two medieval gates leading into Cathedral Close, which is like a village around the cathedral, with a school and houses, some occupied by cathedral staff and others privately owned. It is very peaceful there. Outside Cathedral Close there’s a maze of little streets, passageways and courtyards, some cobbled, with medieval buildings occupied privately, as well by shops, pubs and bars. There’s even a haunted hotel!
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Very interesting! I thought perhaps tombland was the cemetary!
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Love the comfortable shoes analogy.. !!!
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What a special pair of eyes to see the skyline in such a way: “the bookends of castle and cathedral;”
Wonderful.
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Thank you, Amaya!
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Such a gorgeous description of Norwich, Kim!💜
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Beautiful journey, Kim 🙂 And, the images are lovely…I can imagine the feeling, wandering around those streets (and losing the track of time).
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Thank you, Neeraj!
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I like the way you withheld the name of the town until the end. The beauty unfolded around me as I read each line.
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Thank you, Kerry
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“up ancient steps to the bookends of castle and cathedral;” Loved that and the whole beautiful serenade to this city…
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Thank you, Margaret.
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A wonderful tribute and description of your city. I’m adding it to my ‘places to visit’ list!
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Thank you, Viv! Let me know when you’re up this way and I can show you around.
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Will do!
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A wonderful tour, especially enjoyed by my mind’s toes. 🙂
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I’m delighted your mind’s toes enjoyed it, Magaly! 🙂
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Your descriptions are deliciously vivid. My feet felt that grass…
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Loving the photos and the wonderful details in your poem here. I think you should enter it into your newspaper or tourism office! 🙂
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Thank you, Lill! 🙂
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It’s city enough, I’d say. (K)
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It’s still not very modern – no skyscrapers and very few high-rises. I love the history!
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We don’t have that here in America. It’s definitely worth preserving.
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Ok, I’m sold! Sign me up for the next tour package! 🙂 Your elegant description and vivid imagery put me right there!
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Thank you so much, Frank! I’m more than happy to show you around! 🙂
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