seagulls cut low arcs
dancing across a clear sky
an intake of breath
ice clinks in a sparkling glass
long shadows begin to crowd
Kim M. Russell, 22nd June 2018
My response to Carpe Diem #1459 evening lull (yuunagi)
Today’s summer kigo is evening lull (yuunagi).
writing in north norfolk 
I do like that image of the long shadows crowding.
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Thank you, Janice.
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A gorgeous tanka Kim. Your first three lines are great and could do like a haiku. Awesome, well done!
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Thank you, Kristjaan! I was going to write a haiku but then it kind of turned into a tanka. 😊
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