following folk tales
in crumbs and moonlit pebbles
finding adulthood
Kim M. Russell, 15th July 2018
My daily response to Carpe Diem Summer Retreat 2018 Finding the Way
At Carpe Diem, it’s time again for the traditional seasonal retreat: a period of 30 days in which the goal is to write a daily haiku or tanka about a theme. In this year’s Summer Retreat the theme is ‘Finding the Way’.
I like how you have used the deeper meaning of a fairytale.
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Thank you, Kristjaan.
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I liked your haiku or tanka.
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Thank you.
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Excellent
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Thank you
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Nice one 🙂
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Thanks Janice 😊
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this is really wonderful Kim – I love how this works so well as a haiku – I keep flipping the 1st and 3rd lines around the 2nd – and it just is so rich – each word is … word perfect and speaks (in a sublime way) of this journey …
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Thank you so much, Pat! I’m not sure if I can keep this up for the next 27 days, though. 🙂
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LOL – I totally know what you mean! but then, we don’t have to force it, and some days, more than one reflection comes to mind, which is fine too …
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