blossoms at their peak
the mountain the same as always
at daybreak
the sky ribboned with pink clouds
the gift of another day
what kind of tree
with the unknown flower
such a fragrance
full of memories and dreams
an essence we can’t bottle
melting away
the brush draws up the water
of a spring
hear the musical tinkles
the trickling of clear water
with a fan
drinking wine in the shadow
of scattered blossoms
the bottles drain drop by drop
petals turn from pink to brown
© Matsuo Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold) Kim M. Russell, 7th August 2018
My response to Carpe Diem Renga With Basho #5 such a fragrance
In this episode of the newly renamed ‘Renga With Basho’, a feature in which we create renga from haiku written only by Matsuo Basho, we are creating renga together with the master with a minimum of six and a maximum of twelve stanzas. We may choose our own line up of the given haiku and complete the renga with our own two-line stanzas between the haiku; the ‘hokku’ and the ‘ageku’ must be connected in some way to make the circle complete.
This is very clever – your verses blend well with Basho’s.
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Thank you so much, Suzanne.
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Ah, such Excellence! (@–>–)
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Very impressive…beautfifully done !
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I enjoyed your responses and arrangement very much.
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Thank you, Janice.
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Awesome renga Kim. You made a wonderful chain of stanza to bind the haiku together.
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Thank you, Kristjaan.
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Nicely done, Kim.
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Thank you, Ken.
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