grasses wilt:
the braking locomotive
grinds to a halt Yamaguchi Seishi, (Tr. Michael R. Burch)
dust between the rusty tracks
a dandelion stoplight Kim M. Russell, 11th September 2018

My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Chained Together III: grasses wilt
In a month of Tan Renga challenges, today we have a haiku by Yamaguchi Seishi, translated by MichaelBurch.
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #3: Kim Russell’s latest tan #renga for Carpe Diem!
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Thank you, Frank!
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Awesome 2nd stanza … such a fragile scene you have created with your lines. Awesome image by the way.
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Thanks Kristjaan!
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Ah, such Awesomeness! (@–>–) (@–>–)
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