loneliness of leaves
whispering sweet promises
to a single heart Kim M. Russell, 23rd September 2018
life without love is like a tree
without blossoms or fruit Khalil Gibran (re-worked by Chèvrefeuille)
My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Chained Together III: Without Blossom
In today’s episode we have another Hineri challenge: we have to create the first three-line stanza instead of the second two-line stanza, which has been re-worked from a quotation from Khalil Gibran and provided by Chèvrefeuille.
writing in north norfolk 
Lovely, Kim. It seems harder to me (though I haven’t tried) to create the first three lines.
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Thank you, Merril. It is hard to find way into the first three lines when you don’t have a context.
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Fabulous! (@–>–)
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Thanks Dorna!
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Excellent completion.
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Thank you!
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