a one-way ticket
becoming free again
broken sunflower
heartsick for the scents of home
ripened fruit and failing leaves
Kim M. Russell, 4th October 2018

My response to Carpe Diem #1514 Exile (Tan Renga Challenge)
In today’s episode, we have E for Exile and the challenge is to create a tan renga from one of the two given haiku written by Chèvrefeuille:
gone in exile
without the one who kissed me all over –
broken sunflower
gone in exile
to become free again
the people of God
© Chèvrefeuille
Alternatively, we can create a ‘fusion’ haiku from both. Mine has turned into a fusion tan renga.
Well done.
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Thank you, Ken.
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Excellent Kim
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Thank you, Kristjaan!
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Fabulous! (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna!
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