was a cold flame on the horizon;
it cast a wide-reaching shadow,
an other-worldly drift of snow
where three royal daughters
were trapped by many-headed
trolls who loved to have
their scalps scratched.
Tempted by a generous reward,
a soldier arrived with a well-honed sword
to make the trolls’ ugly heads roll.
The teenage princesses, not stereotypes
but feminists fond of underdogs,
quickly defended their monstrous pets –
the soldier lives as their slave yet.
Kim M. Russell, 12th October 2018

My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Wordy Thursday with Wild Woman: Un-Fairy Tales
Sherry reminds us that, in 2011, Kerry created a prompt entitled Un-Fairy Tales. She says she loves the whole idea of rewriting those old tales and thought we might enjoy it, too. She would like us to choose any fairy tales we wish and re-write them: give it better or worse endings, switch them up, make them current, or write new ones of your own.
‘The troll was quite willing, and before long he fell asleep and began snoring’ – The Three Princesses in the Blue Mountain a Norwegian folk tale
Ha! That is an interesting un-fairy tale. Rooting for the underdogs and making your own choices are the much-needed interpretations that we require from the tradition of fables and storytelling. I enjoyed the non-stereotypical ending. 🙂
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Thank you, Anmol. I’m on my way home to catch up with reading and commenting.
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This is FANTASTIC!!! I love the many-headed trolls loving to have their heads scratched, and that she saved them. A fable for our times. This poem is a delight to read. Made my day!
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Thank you so much, Sherry! I was torn between Rapunzel and the lesser known tale, and The Blue Mountain won. I am so pleased you like it!
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Smart
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Hehe! Yes! Wit and wisdom here. Love it.
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Thank you, De!
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This is fabulous! ❤️ Loved the non-stereotypical ending to this tale 😊
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Thank you so much, Sanaa! 🙂 xxx
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Love that you used a fairytale I was unfamiliar with. The ending was excellent, as was that illustration.
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Thank you, Sara.
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