Traditional tales are steeped in bloody red:
apples, shoes and roses are less than innocent
and Riding Hood performed a striptease for the wolf.
She removed her clothes and was eaten by the wolf
(for all we know her underwear was also red),
believing her hairy grandma must be innocent.
When I first heard this tale, wide-eyed and innocent,
I was not so much afraid of the big bad wolf
as determined I would never wear the colour red.
I still blush red, innocent and enthralled by a fairy tale wolf.
Kim M. Russell, 14th October 2018
My response to Imaginary Garden with Real Toads Fussy Little Forms: Tritina
This weekend, Marian’s proposing that we try the trtina, the more compact step-sister of sestina and villanelle, which was invented by the American poet Marie Ponsot. The tritina is a ten-line poem consisting of three tercets and a final line, featuring three repeating, non-rhyming line-end words that follow this pattern: 1-2-3; 3-1-2; 2-3-1; and the final line contains all 3 words as 1-2-3
It does not have a required meter, but it is generally thought that tritina should have a consistent meter or rhythm throughout to emphasize the repetition and musical-refrain quality of the verse. The single end line is a conclusion, so tritina can be similar to a sonnet in that a turn can happen between lines 9 and 10.
Marian has shared an example by David Yezzi: ‘Tritina for Susannah’ as well as one by Marie Ponsot, ‘Roundstone Cove’. My poem was inspired by Thursday’s un-fairytale prompt.
That’s a spicy new spin on that fairy tale! Very intriguing. 🙂
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Cheers Barry! 🙂
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I smile a little here in the quiet night. My mind was not towards Riding Hood but rather on that innocent grandmother. Grandmas are not always innocent, just dig through the writings and drawings they’ve left behind. Good on the form, loved the poem and what’s hidden.
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Thanks JIm.
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Great use of those three signature words to tell the tale.. good moral lesson at the end.
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Thank you, Kerry.
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Hahaha nice thought I never thought
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Ahhh… this is terrific. The repeating words not so perceptible as I read, because I was enthralled with what you are saying. That is a good thing in my book!
Have you seen the movie of Into the Woods? My favorite part was the depiction of Red Riding Hood and the Wolf. Yowza 🙂
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Thanks Marian. 😊
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The red as a warning… maybe it was put there to make children cautious of being vain… for sure it helped in your case 🙂 The worst part of the red has to be those red shoes though.
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Apparently colours in fairy tales have special meanings. I agree about red as a warning. 😊
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Warning! Warning! Danger! I agree. Colors did have significance in tales. I lived the doing a striptease for the wolf. I never thought of that.
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Apparently there are quite a lot of different versions but in the original one the wolf made her take her clothes off and get into bed with him!
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Lol! I like the twist here 🙂
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Cheers Viv! 🙂
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Very cool!
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Thanks!
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So it looks like a few of us went with Riding Hood. I love your use of red, and the strip tease.
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😊
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Love this Kim- you nailed the form!
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Thank you, Linda!
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I just love this! It’s perfect in every way.
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Thank you, Teresa!
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