after long hot nights
the tempering of passion
in cold light of day
Kim M. Russell, 1st November 2018

My response to Carpe Diem’s Autumn Retreat 2018 Love Eternally
It’s time for Carpe Diem’s Autumn Retreat, a period of 30 days to write haiku or tanka every day on a specific theme: ‘love eternally’.
“tempering” is most effective Kim! it really adds something to this flavour and ambiance in the haiku!
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