from a thunderous sky
squalls of rain drum on windows
cloudburst crescendo
Kim M. Russell, 12th November 2018
My response to Carpe Diem #1543 rainstorm
In today’s episode in a month of celebrating the beauty of autumn, we have a rainstorm and an example of a haiku on that theme, which was spotted on the website ‘Hello Poetry’:
Color me in shades of grey,
Like the dawning skies awaiting
The opening of heaven’s floodgates.
© Meenu Syriac
writing in north norfolk 
“thunderous” and “crescendo” bring this to life.
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Thank you, Ken.
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Yes very vivid imaging of rainstorm progression
Much💛🌦💛love
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Love,love,love cloudburst crescendo!
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Thanks Linda!
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Ah, more Awesomeness! (@–>–) (@–>–) (@–>–)
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Thank you, Dorna! 😊
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Love the dramatic sounds in this haiku!
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Thank you, Lynn!
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