icicles hanging
at the gutter of the old mansion
sun’s reflections
mirroring moments of life
before melting forever
this cold winter night
laying naked under my quilt
feels like summer
intense heat of ecstasy
drives the moon to distraction
snowdrops blooming
waving goodbye to Winter
nearly Spring
no more shades of monochrome
hello to Technicolor
Narcissus
in love with his reflection
vainglorious guy
bowing his golden trumpet
to the ripples in the stream
light of ember
mysterious shadows on the wall –
a cool summer night
Autumn’s gentle reminder
that all things come to an end
messenger of heaven
circling high above my head –
re-thinking my life
sun dips behind the roof top
and melts slowly into night
Chèvrefeuille Kim M. Russell, 5th May 2019

My response to Carpe Diem Weekend Meditation #83 Renga With … sun’s reflection
In this weekend’s meditation, our challenge is a ‘Renga With ..’. episode with our host, Chèvrefeuille. The aim is to create a Renga with the six given six haiku by adding two-line stanzas between the haiku. We may choose our own ‘line-up’ but should try to make it a closed chain by linking ageku and hokku.
Very lovely! I loved the way the lines flowed back and forth.
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Thank you! 🙂
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I am honored Kim. What a wonderful renga you have created with the haiku I gave to work with. Thank you.
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Thank you so much for your high praise, Kristjaan.
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Fabulous! (@—>—)
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Narcissus
in love with his reflection
vainglorious guy
bowing his golden trumpet (blowing)?
to the ripples in the stream
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It’s a narcissus or daffodil bowing its golden tru.oet. 😊
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Ah, Thank You, Kim for the clarification.
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Trumpet!
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Thanks Dorna!
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