between budding trees
awash with lukewarm sunshine
a wave of bluebells
Kim M. Russell, 31st October 2019

My response to Carpe Diem #1772 Virginia Blue Bell
In the last episode of Carpe Diem’s festive 7th birthday month, we have a beautiful small flower: the bluebell. I’m not sure whether mine is a haiku or a senryu.
beautiful those “waves of bluebells” got me
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Thank you!
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Waves of bluebells–glorious!
Yours is a Haiku in my book. Mine is so aggressively a Senryu that it grabs its readers by the lapels and shouts in their faces: I AM A SENRYU!
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Thanks Cara! 🙂
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Waves of bluebells–glorious!
Yours is a Haiku in my book. My bit today is so aggressively a Senryu that it grabs its readers by the collar and screams in their faces: “I AM A SENRYU AND DON’T YOU FORGET IT!”
~Cie~
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Thank you, Cara! I’ll be over to read in the morning.
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Beautiful.
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fabulous imagery! (@—>—-)
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Cheers Dorna! 🙂
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