early morning snow
landing on a fresh white page
robins track haiku
Kim M. Russell, 5th December 2019
My response to Poets United Midweek Motif: Changes
Susan and Sumana bring us the aroma of change this midweek, with the sad news of their departure as hosts on 18th December. They have shared poems by Rilke, Mary Oliver and Naomi Shihab Nye, as well as extracts from a Tagore song and the following from ‘Images for Godard’ by Adrienne Rich:
‘the mind of the poet is changing
the moment of change is the only poem.’
writing in north norfolk 
This made me smile.
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Kim,
An absolutely delightful Haiku.I love that it was a robin!
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I find bird tracks in the snow quite interesting. Makes a pretty design.
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🙂
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This is such a stunning haiku, Kim! 😍😍😍
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Thank you Sanaa! 😀
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The haiku robins write, I will certainly read. I rarely see them on snow here, except a little bit in spring. At my Mom’s house, we already had chickadee writing, with a little seed in the letters.
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We’ve had a few robins and, today, two very large, handsome dock pheasants.
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BEAUTIFUL!
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Thank you, Sherry!
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Very nice
Thanks for dropping by to read mine
Much💞love
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Much love to you, too, Gillena.
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Clever little robins, writing haiku! 😉
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Oh my! I don’t have adequate words to describe this beauty. Brilliant!!!
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Thank you so much, Sumana!
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