adding father’s name
to the family tombstone
with room for my own Nicholas Virgilio
a generation’s story
inked green by moss and lichen Kim M. Russell, 29th January 2020
My response to Carpe Diem’s Tan Renga Wednesday #11: family tombstone
It’s Tan Renga Wednesday, when our challenge is to add a two-line stanza (approx. 7-7 syllables) to a given haiku. This week we have a haiku by a modern haiku poet.
Oh, yes. I can see the scene perfectly.
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Thank you, Janice.
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you are so good at painting pictures with words
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Thank you, candy!
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very nice! (@—>—)
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Thank you, Dorna!
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