a last leaf
swirls on the wind towards the east –
first snow falls gently Chèvrefeuille
the seasons dance a duet
until everything is white Kim M. Russell, 6th February 2020
My response to Carpe Diem Tan Renga Wednesday #12: a last leaf
This Tan Renga Wednesday, our challenge is to complete a haiku from the archives by adding a two-line stanza to make it into a tanka.
writing in north norfolk 
Love the idea of the seasons dancing a duet.
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Beautiful Tanka.
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Thank you, Eugenia.
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It’s really very nice this “duet of seasons”.
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Thank you, Virginia!
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Kim!
You have been promoted at the Go Dog Go Cafe today!
Stephen
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Thank you, Stephen!
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🤓🙏🤓
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https://godoggocafe.com/2020/02/06/promote-a-poet-writer-thursday-february-6-2020/comment-page-1/#comment-43311
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Love the word duet and imagining that dance.
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Thank you, Colleen.
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Nice! I can imagine the lively snowflakes dancing.
~cie~
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😊
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