Gazing at flowery constellations
clustered around the silver birch
by the back gate, friends and relations
come to mind in a surge of blue.
I don’t need to search
myself, my heart or mind for embers
of memories. I remember you,
and wonder who will think of me,
perhaps standing beneath a tree,
ankle-deep in azure forget-me-nots
blinking here on Earth, while I
twinkle above them in a star-filled sky.
Kim M. Russell, 29th April 2024
It’s the last day of April, at the dVerse Poets Pub it’s Tuesday Poetics with Punam, and today we are writing poems about self.
She has shared lines from an old favourite of mine, ‘Love after Love’ by Derek Walcot, an extract from ‘Invictus’ by William Ernest Henley, and further lines from Melody Gotfred and WB Yeats.
For today’s Poetics prompt, Punam challenges us, after a whole month of NaPoWriMo and writing for others, to write for and about ourselves: self-love, self-doubt, self-scrutiny, self-healing, whatever we feel comfortable with sharing.
The forget me nots are a wonderful way to be remembered… we were very much on the same wavelength wondering how to be remembered….
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We were!
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It is that time of the spring season and I do see them twinkling blue in the garden. Love those flowery constellations and your ending lines, a sense of perspective:
blinking here on Earth, while I
twinkle above them in a star-filled sky.
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Thank you, Grace. I’m really looking forward to the wild meadow flowers I plated.
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A fine farewell to a month of poems and the mouth that whispered them. Perfect flower for the sentiment.
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Cheers Brendan!
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They do look like constellations! So lovely. Love the closing lines, Kim.
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Thank you, Punam!
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You are welcome.
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Just visited a friend’s garden in Hertfordshire this moring, and saw such forget-me-nots – we were taling also about legacy, and who would clebrate our uniqueness when we were gone-to-the-stars …
These things need to be expressed, with kindness and gentleness. These thoughts need to be wondered. Thank you for doing this with such sweetness and openness. May your words continue to cheer, and to buoy us up, Kim!
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Thank you so much! I love seeing forget-me-nots, bluebells, all the typically English flowers. I recently sowed wild meadow flowers in the garden, around the silver birch and in several other places, and can’t wait for them to come up! Maybe the garden is my legacy.
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and your poetry, which is a garden of words…
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😍
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Beautiful poem! I for one love the opening lines most. By the way, forget-me-nots can be pink when the soil is low on iron.
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Thank you, Astrid. We also have bluebells in our garden, some of which are pink.
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luv how the stars twinkle above the forget-me-nots
much♡love
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Thank you, Gillena. Much love to you.
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I enjoyed how “Forget-me-not” did double duty in this poem.
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Thank you , Maria!
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so beautiful Kim. The stars beneath our feet, the flowers in the sky. Love that juxtaposition
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Thanks so much, Eric!
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What a lovely poem. There’s something magical about forget-me-nots. Your poem has the same quality.
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Thanks so much, Suzanne!
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I enjoyed the sentiment, Kim, as well as the forget-me-nots. 🙂
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Thank you, Kitty!
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Never, ever, stop “twinkling”. ❤
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Thank you, Susan!
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it is interesting to think about what others will remember of us when we are gone. The forget-me-nots are a nice touch, Kim. Well done.
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Thanks Dwight!
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”ankle-deep in azure forget-me-nots
blinking here on Earth, while I
twinkle above them in a star-filled sky.”
I especially love those last three lines and how they wrap you into everything, flowers and stars. And we both included constellations in our poems.☺️
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Thank you, Melissa! Great minds think alike…
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Forget-me-nots – a perfect flower to surround oneself in.
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Thank you, Dale!
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🌺🌺(pretend they’re bluish-purple) 😉
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Lovely flowers, lovely thoughts, lovely poetry to warm and wonder at.
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Thank you, Dora!
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Most welcome!
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Your poem flows, gently with no pretense … simple honesty. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thank you, Helen!
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Beautiful, Kim! I love the forget-me-nots, and the photo you shared.
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Thank you, Sara!
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