I love the month of May. The nights are growing longer and it’s been warm enough to sit on the patio until early evening. Although most of the blossom has disappeared from the trees, we have a large rose bush covered in pink flowers, and honeysuckle covers the trellis, as well as the trunk and branches of the cherry tree. The scent is delicious and will last into summer, when it will be superseded by the pungent smell of dried grass with a hint of the meadow flowers I sowed several weeks ago.
the sun’s light is spent –
we follow its faded ghost
into the moonlight
Kim M. Russell, 20th May 2024
It’s Haibun Monday at the dVerse Poets Pub and Frank is our host with a little May Transience.
He says that May is ‘a month of lengthening days, blooming flowers, and rising temperatures… Yet how quickly such a bounty passes. Flowers wilt, blossoms fade, and days pass.’ He says it’s a time to remember transience, the impermanence of everything, also known as Mono no Aware, which he has explained in great detail, as well as giving us some lovely examples.
Frank would like us to let’s imbue our haibun with Mono no Aware. We may write on any topic (although bonus points to one related to May) as long as our haibun embody that wistful sadness marking the beauty of transience.
I also love May! My mother always had fresh picked tulips and lilacs on the table for my birthday parties when I was young. And of course, with it name, have always been partial to Lily of the Valley! “delicious” scents indeed….and love your haiku.
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Thank you Lill!
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I noted the moonlight… but barely since the sun seems to never set. Still full daylight here at 9 PM. We still have plenty of bloom, but we are in transition now.
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You’re an hour ahead of us, and we still have daylight until eight. I haven’t seen the Northern Lights yet, although they’ve been spotted and photographed all over Norfolk.
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Gorgeous haibun, Kim. You bring the landscape and peaceful atmosphere to life. Of course, I *love* your musical choice. Geo is the world to me.
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Thanks so much, LIsa!
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You’re welcome.
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I’m another may-bird – my mother picked fragrant wallflowers and left a vase of them by ny bedside one day of May. Lovely haibun, and haiku, and a wistful reminder of impermanence from George Harrison, playing as I type this – thank you, and happy moon-ing!
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I’m pleased you enjoyed my haibun and the little blast of George, Happy moo-ning too!
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Love the haiku and its layers of meaning.🌓
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Thanks Melissa!
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Haibunilicious!
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Cheers Ron!
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Very nicely done, Kim.
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Thank you, Dwight.
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Our May has been very wet, and the flowers are finally blooming ferociously. Beautiful haibun!
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Thank you!
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Even that fading light is a sign of change.
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Thank you, Ken.
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I love how your haiku exudes the mono no aware in complement to your exuberant prose! Beautifully done, Kim!
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Thanks so much, Frank!
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Beautiful Kim! Love your haiku, love it my friend… 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
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Thank you, Rob!
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Oh that haiku is memorable as is your haibun. I can smell the roses and honeysuckle. I have a honeysuckle trying to flower at the moment too. I think I have it in the wrong place. Just beautiful
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Thanks so much, Dianne!
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Your haibun reads like a hymn to spring. It’s delightful.
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Thank you, Suzanne!
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Luv this haibun. There is a humble sense of acceptance to seasonal change. The ghost of the sun’s light in the haiku is a lovely dramatic image.
Thanks for dropping by my blog
much♡love
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Thank you, Gillena, for your thoughtful comments. Much love to you!
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Yes, in May everything is rich and fresh. To soon gone. Lovely fragrant post!
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Thank you, Yvonne!
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You captured the transience of a season passing…lovely haiku, Kim!
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Thank you very much, Lynn!
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Dear Kim, you brought the goodness,, the essence of May to each reader … haibun loveliness.
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Thank you so much, Helen!
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Pink roses and honeysuckle are all over our neighborhood–they do mark the transition to summer, in a sweetly scented way as your haibun so splendidly describes, before they too fade.
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Thank you, Dora. I’m looking forward to the meadow flowers now.
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Your words are gorgeous and your haiku is utterly beautiful 🌸
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Thank you so much, Lesley!
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You are so welcome, Kim 🙏💖
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I love the sunlight as a faded ghost! Never thought of it that way, but it fits at dusk.
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Thank you, Cris!
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You’ve described a season slowly fading away so beautifully.
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Thank you!
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I love your haiku, Kim!
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Thank you, Sara!
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Oh the rich feast of smells and visuals, but also how both the day and life itself transit to dark and moonlight, beautiful imagery. BTW All Thongs Must Pass is my all time fave album.
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Thank you, Paul!
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