High in the dark dome, you,
my late-flowering moon, become
a fully bloomed pearl, tattooed
with gossamer veins. Below,
grey and white houses tumble
down the valley, spangled
for a moment by the light, until
you are hidden by cloud,
wrapped in crushed velvet.
Our monthly tryst is over now;
I watch you sink, heavy and slow
outside my lonely window.
Come back soon,
my precious moon.
Kim M. Russell, 6th June 2024
Image by Jason Mavrommatis on Unsplash
It’s Thursday and time for Open Link Night at the dVerse Poets Pub, where Lisa is in charge of the bar and we can link up any one poem of our choice or write to the movie prompt.
Lisa not only tells us about how she grew up watching movies with her father, she has also shared a poem by Billy Collins, as well as ten of The American Film Institute’s most famous movie quotes of all time.
There are three options to the challenge. I have chosen option 2, one of given quotes from AFI: “My precious” — from The Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers (2002).
Kim, you polish your precious so well here!
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Thanks Lisa!
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You’re very welcome.
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A perfect mating of sentiment in a context even more true than the former. I look up at your moon with the loving eye of Smeagol looking down at that lustrous thing in the dark.
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A perfect response, Brendan!
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Lovely lunar ode Kim – “Our monthly tryst is over now;” so many partings each year but greetings too
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Thank you, Laura.
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Great Kim – a love song to the moon – I loved it and the beautiful sensibility it is written with.
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Cheers Scott!
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What a beautiful moon poem, Kim…
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Thank you, Andrew!
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I prefer your precious to the creepy my precious from The Lord of the Rings. Lovely writing, Kim!
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Thanks Nolcha!
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Dreamy and romantic. I love “a fully bloomed pearl, tattooed
with gossamer veins.” A wonderful description, though I might be biased.😉
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Thanks so much, Melissa!
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Ode to the moon – lovely. I esp like “until
you are hidden by cloud,
wrapped in crushed velvet.”
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Thank you, Debi!
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The monthly rendezvous with the precious moon, oh I too have been seduced by it’s magic.
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She’s irresistible.
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Kim, because of you I will look at the moon with an altered view .. I will spot the gorgeous gossamer veins. I may even consider myself ‘trysting’ with the moon tonight !!
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Thank you, Helen!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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I like your tryst with the Moon!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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You are welcome.
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Stellar imagery, Kim! Lovely work~
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Thank you, Jennifer!
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This is lovely Kim
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Thank you, Kim!
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Stunning line
“the future grasped firmly
by the hands”
much🤍love
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Stunning line
“Our monthly tryst is over now;”
much🤍love
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Thank you, Gillena!
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A lovely ode, and in this line: “Our monthly tryst is over now”, I love the werewolf undertones! 🙂
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Thank you, Nina!
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Powerful, almost haunting – not quite – lines. Very much like your style, how each iine flows to the other.
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Thank you, Ain.
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