Grief is a tangled mess,
a knot of ghosts and memories,
its sting is in life’s unevents:
a hermit crab without a shell
moving in to plastic and metal
trash; a honey bee poisoned by pesticide;
a wildflower wilting in heat by a roadside.
Kim M. Russell, 8th July 2024

Image by Mark Harpur on Unsplash
It’s the second Monday in July, and the first prompt at the dVerse Poets Pub after the summer break is the Quadrille, a poem of exactly 44 words (excluding the title), which can be written in any style, rhymed or unrhymed, and includes a word supplied by the dVerse host who, today, is Merril.
Congratulations to Merril and her husband on recently celebrating their 46th wedding anniversary. She tells us that it was a beautiful day, a few hours of which they spent on the beach. She says that they saw crabs of different sizes scurrying across the sand and dropping into holes as they approached.
Which is why today’s word is crab – and Merril has even found poems with the word ‘crab’ in them, for example ‘Especially When the October Wind’ by my old favourite, Dylan Thomas, ‘Goblin Market’ by Christina Rossetti, and Mary Oliver’s ‘The Hermit Crab’.
So, we are writing poems of exactly 44 words, including the word crab, or some form of the word—crabby, crabapple, crabbing, etc.
This is deeply observational and so sad. I hope the hermit crab can find a shell.🐚
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Thank you, Melissa, I hope so too.
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Wow, yes, this. 100%.
~David
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Thanks David!
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So much in these few words, Kim. The grief that seems overpowering, and the state of our Earth, where even the crabs and bees are suffering.
Thank you for the kind good wishes!
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Thank you, Merril. It would have been my Mum’s birthday last Friday and on Saturday my cousin died after a battle with cancer.
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Oh, Kim. I’m so sorry. No wonder why the grief was palpable in this short poem. Sending hugs.
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Thank you, Merril.
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You’re very welcome, Kim!
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a knot of ghosts and memories… This is a great line. Well done, Kim.
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Thank you, Dwight.
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You are welcome.
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the metaphors really emphasise the vulnerability of grief Kim
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Thank you, Laura.
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This is deeply poignant, Kim! 🩷 I like the image of grief as “a hermit crab without a shell.”
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Thank you, Sanaa.
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That first line hits me. And feeling so sad for the crab and the honeybee. What a tangled mess.
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Thank you, Grace.
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What an original way to describe grief, Kim!
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Thank you, Nolcha!
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grief as
a knot of ghosts and memories
indeed. detailed, uncomfortable imagery builds the knot
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Thank you, LIsa.
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You’re most welcome, Kim.
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“its sting is in life’s unevents”–such a wonderful insight Kim. (K)
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Thank you, Kerfe.
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Such a poignant meditation on grief, and the imagery of a hermit crab without its shell hits home. Many thanks for sharing.
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Thank you!
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I like the direction you took this prompt. Well done.
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Thank you, Maria.
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Some profound observations and exceptional phrases. Grief can be overwhelming.
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Thank you so much, Punam.
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My pleasure.
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Such a good poem Kim.
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Thank you, Kim!
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Grief is despair. And you’ve described it very well.
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Thank you, Aboli.
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The examples you chose, the crab recycling plastic, bees poisoned and wildflowers dying, small things, but with such great import. The small tragedies often hit harder than the big ones.
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Thank you, Jane, I’ve my share of all kinds of tragedies.
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We all do in the end 😦
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An exquisite concentration of imagery that sharply stings. Beautifully composed Q, Kim.
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Thanks so much, Dora!
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My pleasure!
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‘A hermit crab without a shell’ – yes indeed. Thanks for sharing from your heart in this poignant poem.
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Thanks so much, Carol.
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Hi Kim, this is such a heartbreaking poem. I also see these awful things and they make me so sad.
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Thank you Robbie.
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My pleasure
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Wow, yes grief can feel like a hermit crab without its shell, open to the pain, trying to cover it, but missing desperately that safe someone. Very good.
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“its sting is in life’s unevents:”
Great line, Kim!
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Thank you, Sara!
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Great imagery to describe your grief!
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Thank you so much, Willy.
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