I look at the garden and surrounding fields, and marvel at the abundance of autumn. A squirrel balances on a fence post, nibbling a piece of windfall apple. Cooing pigeons balance on the overhead electricity wire. I wish had better balance. As I’ve grown older, I’ve lost my centre, bump into things, trip and fall. However, I haven’t lost my spiritual balance, my enjoyment of nature and her transitions throughout the year, especially autumn, with her fruitfulness and gorgeous colours, and the balance between night and day, warmth and chill, before winter takes over.
with a glowing flounce
day begins yielding to night
balancing seasons
Kim M. Russell, 23rd September 2024
Image by Shane Young on Unsplash
This Haibun Monday at the dVerse Poets Pub we are writing about the equinox with Frank, our host.
He says that the solar equinox is when ‘Night and Day meet as equals. Summer yields to Autumn, or Winter bows to Spring’… a moment in time when the Sun crosses the Earth’s equator, which is to say, appears directly above the equator, rather than north or south of the equator. On the day of the equinox, the Sun appears to rise “due east” and set “due west”.’
Frank gives us an in-depth explanation, as well as examples of poems about the equinox by Elizabeth Alexander, Emily Jungmin Yoon and David Dayson.

I have not really seen it as a balance before… since I can only think about how it’s getting darker and darker…
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I must be an optimist.
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I agree, Kim, it’s all about balance. It only lasts a moment and we spend the next six months clawing our way back.
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I’m dreading winter this year without the fuel allowance. Heating our house is a nightmare.
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My sympathy Kim. Fingers crossed it is a mild winter. My house is has huge windows- the main room is always cold.
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Thank you, Kim. Our cottage has thick walls and is lovely and cool in hot weather, but we have storage heaters, very expensive, especially when one has a broken dial and we can’t turn it down!
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I’m not a fan of storage heaters. My experience in holiday cottages is that they leave the place cold in the evening.
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True.
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I sympathise. It doesn’t even get really cold here, but when a house isn’t heated it feels frozen whatever the latitude.
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Haibunluscious, K. Thanks!
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Thank you, Ron!
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A perfect capture of fall…..
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Thank you, Nolcha.
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Thanks for sharing your equinox balance
much🤍love
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Thanks Gillena, and much love to you.
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Beatifully tunned into the changing seasons, even with the bumping, that seemed to remind me of apples landing to earth with a thump….v nicely done.
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Thank you, Ain.
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I bump into things, trip and fall now, Kim.😅
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Yes, but you have children and pets in your home!
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Day yielding to night…that’s it exactly. (K)
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Thanks Kerfe. I love autumn, but I’m dreading winter this year. In the UK, pensioners’ winter fuel allowance has been taken away from everyone but those on benefits, and the cost of energy has risen. In many parts of the country, there’s a £300 fine if you light an open fire or log burner. I must invest in some thermal underwear.
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I understand completely. My building is very stingy with heat. It’s almost never on after 6 pm. I always sleep with both a sleeping bag and a comforter.
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Nicely done, Kim. I can identify with your haibun comments about aging.
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Thank you, Dwight.
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A wonderful homage to Autumn, with a brilliant balance between prose and haiku. Wonderful, Kim!
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Thanks very much, Frank!
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Autumn’s beauty shines through your writing! 🍂
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Thank you kindly!
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🙌🏼🙏🏼
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I enjoyed how observing critters balancing on things led to discussing loss of balance.
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Thanks Maria!
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KIm,
Sending this back to you in appreciation.
“I haven’t lost my spiritual balance, my enjoyment of nature and her transitions throughout the year, especially autumn, with her fruitfulness and gorgeous colours, and the balance between night and day, warmth and chill, before winter takes over.”
Keep on celebrating the joys of this season to include this season of your life.
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This aging thing! I also have a tendency to bump, knock, scrape my appendages. Your haibun is exquisite …. and I love how you retain the spiritual balance critical to our well-being.
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Thank you, Helen.
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I’m alarmed at the austerity of your government regarding heating. And to impose a fine for lighting a fire! I thought South Africa was ill-managed together with the greed of politicians. You can’t afford a gas heater? The flat I’m in hardly gets any sun and I’ve been grateful to my landladies for allowing me a heater, else I wouldn’t have been able to get out of bed. For us summer is on the doorstep and I’m almost grateful, knowing what the northern hemisphere is facing, even if I don’t like excessive heat and it looks like we’re in for it this season.
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The irony of it all is that my husband worked at the local gas terminal, not far from here, and there is no gas in our village. We’re on the river so it’s not just cold but damp. I think we might invest in a heater that takes gas cylinders.
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