I’ve been waiting for the leaves to change colour, which seems to be a slower process this year, although our cherry tree is way ahead of all the others. Elsewhere there seems to be a rusty covering on some trees, with a few lovely lemon yellow halos here and there, but the peach and orange-coloured cherry in our garden has outdone them all. Sadly, the recent winds have given it a shaking and most of the leaves have fallen.
at first leaves smoulder
setting fire to every tree
a resplendent blush
Kim M. Russell, 21st October 2024
It’s Haibun Monday again at the dVerse Poets Pub, and Frank would like us to re-experience the seasonal kaleidoscope North and South of the Equator. We’re talking about autumn foliage or spring blossoms!
He tells us about Saranac Lake, NY, just past Lake Placid, in the Adirondack Mountains, with its serpentine trails through arrays of orange, yellow, and red. Here in the UK, leaves have begun to turn, too. He reminds us that south of the equator, people are enjoying spring blossoms.
Frank has given examples of poems by Man Ray, Tora Dutt and Kristen Deming to inspire our haibun: one to a few paragraphs of prose, usually written in the present tense, that evoke an experience and are often non-fictional or autobiographical, preceded or followed by one or more haiku—nature-based, using a seasonal image—that complement without directly repeating what the prose stated.

Picture perfect Haibun, Kim. 🙂
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Kitty! 😊
LikeLike
How beautiful! I can tell you love autumn, Kim.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Colleen I do!
LikeLike
It is unseasonable warm has well, but it seems to go faster and faster now… mostly a lot golden yellow here. Love your haibun
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Björn!
LikeLike
A real painting painted there…aside from the leaves having been blown away…your haiku was very literary, lovely tone to the whole piece, really as a haibun should be.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks Ain!
LikeLike
I especially love your haiku, how leaves smolder and set fire to trees. A perfect description of autumn leaves!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Nolcha!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice one Kim
much♡love
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Gillena, and much love to you!
LikeLike
Blazing autumn colours – so beautifully written about.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!
LikeLike
A crescendo of color accents every year. Lovely!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you, Susan!
LikeLike
Beautiful capture of autumn’s magical colors. The wind is quiet here so the trees still have many leaves.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Truedessa. This morning is brighter and calmer here.
LikeLike
There’s a subtle delight even in the remnants of foliage, isn’t there? Love how you captured the transience of the season!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Frank!
LikeLike
Very nice. I especially like the haiku and the line setting fire to every tree
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Stew.
LikeLike
Very nicely done, Kim. Reminds me of “now you see them, now you don’t!”
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Dwight!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A lovely glimpse into your garden, Kim…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Cheers Andrew!
LikeLike
The autumn leaves need the sun to show off the colours. Rain and wind don’t help much. You told that well.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Jane! x
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful, Kim! I love “a rusty covering on some trees, with a few lovely lemon yellow halos here and there”.🍂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks Melissa!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is very pretty, Kim.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Robbie.
LikeLike
here on the west coast, we don’t get the foliage change. someday, i keep telling myself, i want to visit the east coast in autumn to witness it
LikeLiked by 1 person
I’ve only ever been to the USA once. On a visit to New York, I experienced the gorgeous colours in Central Park,
LikeLike
I particularly loved the haiku!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sara!
LikeLike
There’s something about autumn Kim, and your haibun tells it so. That photo offers a colour that is so distinct it’s like a one off artists mix.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks so much, Paul!
LikeLike
It’s so nice to have found this blog… such beautiful thoughts.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Elise.
LikeLike