sculpted by salty waves and sand
the driftwood was almost out of reach
on the dunes above the beach
thrown high in a storm
it had once been part of a living tree
torn from its
roots
and manufactured into something practical
like a boat or a table
by the time it reached the shore
it was unrecognisable
twisted by the artifice of the ocean into something more
than a piece of drift wood
enticing to a collector
of flotsam jetsam shells pebbles
a creator of ocean art
in it she sees her own inquisitive eyes
retroussé nose
curve of lips
it’s almost carved into an autobiographical bust
with slanted shoulders from leaning
over clay wood marble stone
and she can’t wait to get it home
Kim M. Russell, 15th April 2025

It’s Tuesday again – doesn’t it go round fast? – and at the dVerse Poets Pub it’s Poetics with Lisa, who appears to have been busted!
Lisa tells us that every Tuesday she meets up with her family at Frederik Meijer Gardens and Sculpture Park. From the way she describes it, it sounds like a place I’d live to visit. She also describes a new exhibit, ‘Busted: Contemporary Sculpture Busts’, which opened last week.
Lisa says that being geeked with the busts made out of so many materials, in so many styles, with so many ways of communicating “issues tied to identity, mortality, power, and history,” she thought it would make a wonderful prompt and, searching through the dVerse archives, she found a prompt by Victoria C. Slotto from 2012, titled ‘Sculpting a Poem’, which we should read her prompt for guidance.
I love the way nature makes art from the flotsam of things that may mave been used… a wonderful collaboration where the artist has to se (and sense) the bust within.
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Thanks Björn!
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Kim, I love how the artist sees herself in the sculpture of the driftwood! I really wonder how she could improve on its natural design. Wonderful writing and magnificent image you used.
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Thanks so much, Lisa!
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You’re very welcome ❤
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yes indeed , i share your thoughts on driftwoid
much♡live
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Thanks Gillena!
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I enjoyed how you incorporated the sculpted bust into this piece.
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Thank you, Maria.
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Excellent work. I like how nature has sculpted the drift wood into something more, unrecognizable, yet the sculptor sees herself within it and plans to take it and the drift wood will once again be sculpted, this time by human hands, into art.
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Thanks so much, Stew.
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I really love the way you wrote this making your words have life in the print… stretching them out to increase the effect! Very well done, Kim.
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Thank you very much, Dwight!
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You are welcome, Kim.
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A great idea for a terrific poem, Kim.
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Thanks so much, Robbie!
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Wonderful poem that captures the find so well.
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Thank you, Rebecca.
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Great poem, Kim! An artist’s imagination truly is a gift.
Yvette M Calleiro :-)http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Yvette!
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Well the waves really are coming in and out in this verse…gives it an incredible…soothing feel…..and nothing is sculted better than driftwood…I use it very often for fencing, or used to, and decoration…
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I would love to go beachcombing again.
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Is there anything more delightful than the rare find of something this uniquely beautiful (as you have described) in your lovely poem, Kim? Nope, at least not on this fine day.
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Thank you so much, Helen, for such a lovely comment.
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Kim, this piece beautifully captures transformation and self-reflection. The driftwood’s journey feels like an exploration of identity.
Much love,
David
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Thank you very much, David.
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