A
stone is a stone.
it’s reached its final form,
it’s shrunk, it hasn’t grown
or gathered any moss, as long
as it keeps rolling down an incline
of some sort, unaltered, hard,
solid, limestone, sandstone,
marble, granite, a part
of the Earth’s
crust.
Kim M. Russell, 21st April 2025
It’s Quadrille Monday at the dVerse Poets Pub, with Punam as our host.
She introduces the prompt with a little joke about planning to alter the rules of the quadrille and giving an alternative to the 44 words limit – but it’s only a joke. We are still writing poems of 44 words which include a word provided by the host which, this week, is ‘alter’. We can use any word that has alter in it, there are no form restrictions, syllable counting, strict rules for rhyming. Just a poem of 44 word rule (excluding the title).
Love how you focus your lens on “stone” and turn its ordinariness into something extraordinary!
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Thank you, Punam.
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Kim, the stone shape is cute here. The world is a stone, rolling downhill…
You made me think of this song:
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re very welcome.
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And thank you for the blast of Neil Diamond. That song was new to me. Made me think of my dad.
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So glad the song brought your dad to you.
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Quadrillific work, Kim. Danke!
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Cheers Ron!
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keep them stones rolling
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😎
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Lovely form for a fun challenge –
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Thank you, Anna.
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looks likeh it sould be written on a stone, kim!
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I might try that, Eric!
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I love your word stone! A very solid quadrille.
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Solid indeed!
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A Rolling Stone can still rock the world 🙂
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True.
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Kim, I love how grounded this feels—like you carved the poem right out of the earth itself.
~David
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Thank you, David.
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🤗
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Your poem takes me to Simon and Garfunkle and the song: “I am a Rock… “
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Thanks Dwight!
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You are welcome, Kim.
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A great poem for earth day – I’m just a rollin’ stone in the scheme of life.
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Thank you, Truedessa.
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happy Earth Day 22nd April
luv the reality and intrinsic quality of ypur stone
much♡love
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Thank you, Gillena, and happy Earth Day to you too.
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It may have reached its final form … but your quadrille brought it to life. Cheers.
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Thank you, Helen.
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A great idea for a poem, Kim. I’m always so pleased to see ideas that never remotely occurred to me. It’s how I expand my poetry horizons.
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Thank you, Robbie.
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Great quadrille, Kim!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Yvette.
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A perfect quadrille, Kim!
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Thank you, Sara.
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