In a quiet place of greens and greys,
of rippling reflections and pensive days,
a place to muse on form and shape,
in the changing light of the waterscape,
the river’s fringed with leafy trees
that tremble in a gentle breeze
and waver in the flowing river
as if reflected in a mirror.
In the solitude of his atelier,
the artist paints in greens and greys,
capturing the iridescent gleam
as it passes him by midstream.
Kim M. Russell, 16th September 2025

The Barnes Foundation, BF730. In the public domain.
This Tuesday at the dVerse Poets Pub our host for Poetics is Merril, who tells us that, a few weeks ago, she and her husband went to the Barnes Museum in Philadelphia, where her eye was caught by a Monet painting: ‘The Studio Boat’.
Merril says that she loves reflections and rivers, as well as reflecting about many things, including reflections. She says that reflection is a fun word that can mean the image you see in a mirror, glass, polished surface, or water. It can also mean to muse upon something. Merril gives us the example of Jorge Luis Borges’s poem, ‘We are the time. We are the famous’, which does both.
Merril gives us two options for today’s challenge: either write an ekphrastic poem inspired by Claude Monet’s ‘The Studio Boat’ or write a poem on reflection, whatever that means to us—self-reflection, reflection on time’s passing, a reflection in a pool of water, etc. There is no specific form.
I love the way you paint the painter with words, all those wonderful colors make it seems so serene just like the painting.
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Thanks so much, Björn.
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This is so lovely, Kim! I can’t pick out a particular line because it all flows together so beautifully. I love this reflection upon the artist.
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I’m so pleased you like it, Merril. For me, this poem had to rhyme.
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It’s a good rhyme, not forced.
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This is beyond beautiful, Kim 😍 I especially love; “the river’s fringed with leafy trees
that tremble in a gentle breeze.” ❤️❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa.
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You’re most welcome 😘
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Kim, good rhyme scheme. I like how you focus on the person in their environment.
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Thank you, Lisa.
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You’re welcome.
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Lovely,
I like this line a lot:
“capturing the iridescent gleam”.
Très beau!
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Thank you so much!
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Fantastekphrastic work!
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Cheers Ron!
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A true Romantic poem – a song for the world outside and the growing one within our souls every time we look up and out! Jae
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Thanks so much, Jae!
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I love your choice of rhyming couplets. It really feels like the ripples on the river [Seine?]. It’s very gentle and yet still quite strong. Thank you very much.
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Thank you for your kind comments, Aaron.
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You are very welcome!
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I board one of those every morning even though it looks like a white reclining chair in a living room and the river is flowing words. You craft the glide in such smooth pentameter the rhymed couplets pair like swans. So what am I doing here, gawking from the shore? Why else go to see a Monet than to can confirm it truly be done? Now, on the art of comments … (see Writing at Norfolk).
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You captured this very well, Kim. I love the descriptive images in your poem!
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Cheers Dwight!
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You are welcome!
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This is so sleepy and peaceful.
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Thanks Robbie.
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Your poem fits the image like a glove, Kim! A perfectly suited pair indeed. Well done!
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Thanks so much, Jennifer!
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Love the rhythm and rhymes. 👏
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Thank you, Shaun!
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all couplets gorgeous — great ode to the lovely painting and the prompt. Thanks.
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Thank you very much, Selma.
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Always a pleasure.
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Kim, this is a lovely piece – evocative, calm, with a clear voice. It captures a mood, and gives us space to enter and imagine❤️
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Thank you so much, Ange ❤
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Love the way you have painted this beautiful poem, Kim! Absolutely gorgeous. ❤️
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