I admire my daughter’s vision. After weeks of cooking in a gazebo outside in the garden, carrying bowls of dirty dishes upstairs to the bathroom to wash up, no washing machine, a fridge in the living room, and hardly any space to swing a cat, she is still able to picture her finished kitchen.
There’s no room for me, so I sleep at an Airbnb only a ten-minute walk away, but I spend the days with her – and a variety of workmen, dust and noise. Thankfully, Lucas is at school; he can’t cope with loud noises, but Louie enjoys chatting with the workmen.
I leave them with several more weeks of electricians, plumbers and kitchen fitters, and a vision of a brand-new kitchen.
as the train departs
among a blur of waving
tears smear my glasses
Kim M. Russell, 28th September 2026
On the first Monday back from visiting my daughter, at the dVerse Poets Pub we are writing haibun about vision with Frank, who says that it is the primary sense we enjoy as human beings.
He reminds us that vision is not only eyesight, but so much more: a vision of who we are, and who we want to be, and I find it interesting that Native Americans of certain tribes participated in Vision Quest ceremonies to determine such clarity for themselves.
Frank has shared examples of what some poets have to say about vision to inspire us to write haibun about what vision means to us: ordinary eyesight; extraordinary perception; the eagle’s glare, whether perched or in flight.

I remember when we had the kitchen of our old house updated. Kudos to your daughter for seeing her vision through! You presented a wonderful slice of life with this one, Kim.
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Thank you, Frank. I spoke to her today and the units have been delivered and, I hope, fitted.
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Yes indeed, those tearstainded glasses
BRAVO
much love
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Thank you, Gillena, and much love to you!
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Kim, it is a visit you all will remember. As you will remember seeing their new kitchen on your next visit. A vision is worth the inconvenience. Great haibun.
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Thank you, Lisa! I shall be going back at the beginning of December and look forward to seeing it then, although Ellen will probably send me photos as soon as it’s completed.
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You are welcome. I admire her going through the hardship.
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Nicely done, Kim. I hope they get it finished before cold weather sets in!
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Thank you, Dwight. So do I!
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:>)
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Just to rough it out is already a great adventure for a number of days. To see at the end of the day our own creation a reality is such a satisfaction. Thanks Kim for sharing your daughter’s dream realised! Wonderful lines!
Hank
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Thank you for reading and for your kind comments, Hank.
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Renovations are always fun, depending on how you look at them. You can learn a lot about yourself in the process. Wonderfully creative haibun, Kim and and beautiful emotive haiku.
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Thanks so much, Dianne!
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Nicely done Kim. And dedication to a vision from your daughter.😊
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Thank you, Stew!
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I love the departing emotion after all that you saw – not just the physical things – Jae
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Thank you very much, Jae.
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