I perch on my usual branch,
feathers shivering,
sharp eyes surveying
the naked winter-
weathered landscape,
depressed by concrete cloud.
I open my frost-numbed beak,
rip the air with one loud cry,
release crow-black pain
into the sky.
Kim M. Russell, 2018
My response to Sue Vincent’s Daily Echo Thursday photo prompt – Crow #writephoto
I love this!!
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Thank you!
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What a great final couplet. That crow black pain. Marvellous.
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Thank you, Sarah.
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Very powerfully painted, Kim.
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Thank you, Sue. 😊
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Excellent poem.
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Brava.. 😎🥀
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This rings so true, Kim. Crow-black pain is wonderfully evocative.
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Thank you, Merril.
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The last 3 lines …..magnificent!
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🙂
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Yes. I too, feel that a crow’s cry is akin to some kind of pain.
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It was very misty here yesterday and sounds were muffled – all I could hear was crows.
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Crow-black pain! How lovely!
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Frost numbed.. nice imagery
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Reblogged this on crjen1958.
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Brilliant bird, know whom to trust, an whom not too..
It’s a shame that they die, because a human soul… Funny how we commincate, they’ll show me whom has fed wrongly… Have you ever heard a crow trying to speak english?
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Chris, and for the reblog!
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Kindedly welcome..
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I liked
‘rip the air’ .
Can’t go wrong with crows. Nice.
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Thank you for reading and commenting.
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