My response to Jane Dougherty’s Poetry challenge #14: Take a favourite line
I have taken a line from ‘Blue’ by Joni Mitchell and incorporated it in a tanka:
Songs are like tattoos
Pricking at your tender skin
Begging to come in
And leave indelible stains:
Inky music on your soul
© Kim M. Russell, 2016

Image from jonimitchell.com
I love your interpretation of the line, Kim. I had to look up the original 🙂
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Thanks, Jane.
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So true and well written!
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🙂
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Ink on a pin………………………………..
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Nice spin on the original.
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Thanks, I adore Joni and it had to be a line from Blue 😊
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I love the Blue album. Great job!
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Thanks. It’s hard to choose a favourite, though, because I love them all. Blue was the first one I bought, back in the day.
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I remember listening to the album over and over again. 🙂
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Still do!
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🙂
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