My response to Jane Dougherty’s Poetry challenge #20: Hourglass poetry
element of truth
in snarl of words
sparse slivers
of light
in
shadows
lingering
constellation
of a train of thought
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
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Nice job. There’s much to think about here. I like “snarl of words.” 🙂
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Thank you kindly 🙂
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The contrast between the snarl of words and the brightness of thought.
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Love ‘sparse slivers of light’, great imagery.
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Thank you, Jazzy!
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Silvers of light vs lingering shadows. A perfectly contrasting hourglass. 🙂
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😊
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I love the “lingering/constellation/of a train of thought”
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