My response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie Wordle #101

In the gorgeous glare of neon,
novitiates of nyctophilia
congregate like moths,
lurking
by the irregular structure
of the tattoo parlour,
terrorising
clients and siphoning
erogenous thoughts
as they lie on the adjustable chair,
captives of the eristic artist
for as long as it takes
to pierce and ink
their skin.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Oh wow outstanding use of the words
I loved especially
novitiates of nyctophilia
captives of the eristic artist
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Thank you 🙂 This could transform into a short story.
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I’d love to read it =)
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In the gorgeous glare of neon,
novitiates of nyctophilia
congregate like moths,
lurking
by the irregular structure~ Fantastic lines. A beautiful write.
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I’m delighted you like it. It’s a shade darker than some of my more recent writing!
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Welcome. 🙂
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Well done and really concise!
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Thank you 😊
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Bravo!! (she said clapping enthusiastically!)
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Thank you, Geogia 🙂
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