My response to dVerse Poets Pub Haibun Monday #10: Hanami

“When cherry blossoms
scatter –
no regrets”
Issa
Sixteen years ago, we were looking for a new home. We didn’t have much money but we did have a two bedroom bungalow to sell, with a cherry tree in the front garden. We were looking for a cottage and, as we hoped it would be our last move, it had to be right one. After looking at several ‘wrong’ cottages, I opened an envelope with details from an estate agent for an old traditional cottage that was just out of our price range. It was in a small village on the Norfolk Broads, needed work and had a vendor who was moving abroad and wanted a quick sale. On the day of the appointment, my husband couldn’t go and I went alone.
I fell in love with the wild garden, the peace and quiet, so I arranged another viewing. We discussed the price and decided to chance our arm by offering a considerably lower sum. Of course, the vendor said no, but something in the estate agent’s reply suggested we might stand a chance with another offer. We made it and then had a long wait. We visited the cottage most Sundays, wandering around to the back garden and looking over the gate longingly at the willow, the plum, quince and apple trees. When we finally got the reply, we were ecstatic.
The exchange didn’t go smoothly and all of our belongings were put in storage while our purchasers moved into the bungalow and we went on a planned break to Cologne for a week. On the morning we returned, the estate agent confirmed that the sale was complete and we could collect the keys. That was in October. The cottage was cold, damp and mouldy. It smelled musty, the garden was overgrown and there was much work to do. By the following spring we were settling in and the cottage was becoming more habitable. There were daffodils and tulips in the garden, the trees were budding. And then, to our delight, a small cherry tree, hiding round the side of the house, blossomed and we knew we would be happy. We are still living in the cottage and, at the moment, I am waiting for the cherry to blossom.
In the right garden
cherry tree blossoms each year
banishing regret
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
A sweet story, Kim. Things have a mysterious way of working out sometimes; you did the prompt justice, and more, honoring the cherry tree.
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Thank you, Kathy 🙂
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Smiling at this. The blossoming cherry tree the final gift of confirmation that you did the right thing. Well written!
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Thank you 🙂
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I’m smiling, too. This story gave me a sense of peace. I love the flowering trees of spring.
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Wonderful story and perfect ending.
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A hopeful piece of poetics, Kim. Happy it is working out!
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Thanks, Walt 😁
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I know how tedious that moving in can be & I am happy to read that all finally went well ~ I love the garden blooming again, and with the cherry tree set to bud again, I am sure all regrets will be banished ~ Thanks for sharing your lovely story Kim ~ Have a good week ~
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Thank you, Grace. Have a great week, too. No doubt we’ll meet up again at the Poets Pub! 😊
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Somehow, I feel that tree bloomed again just for you, to let you know it was happy you held out and came home to that place. This is truly an honoring of the cherry tree, it’s beauty, its spirit. A wonderful confirmation of eternal hope and the rewards that hope brings.Thank you so much for responding to the prompt and for this wonderful haibun and haiku. The haiku at the end is perfection and makes me smile.
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Thank you. Your lovely comments have made me smile 😁
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What a happy ending to a stressful process. I think that a garden is a key to the beauty of a home.
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Oh yes, Victoria, I agree 😊
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Ah, sometimes it is the small things that seem to make it all worth while!!
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I think you put your stamp of ownership on it when you visited every weekend, Kim. I love your story and your garden sounds just lovely, cherry tree and all!
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I need to get out there and tidy up just a little but – I don’t want to upset the wildlife 😁
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I get it, Kim!
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🙂
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What a beautiful story of persistence paying off and a lovely unexpected gift!
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Wow, that is quite a story. I am glad that, despite all of the obstacle all eventually worked out in the end. And what a nice touch that the cherry tree in the new location is just about to bloom!
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It has buds on it at the moment 😊
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An uplifting story! Thanks.
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