My response to Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie B&P’s Shadorma and Beyond – Tritina Poem
Steep tangle of forest spills
Over shoulders of promontories,
Falling and rising to the lake.
Mirrored in the surface of the lake,
Amongst the ripples and the spills,
Are stony faces of promontories.
Smooth, worn rock of promontories,
Rolling down to the still water of the lake,
Is refreshed and soothed by the spills:
The echo of water spills down promontories and fills the lake.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Deb Gibson, Canadian Artist, Kilarney, acrylic on canvas
writing in north norfolk 
Oh this fits the form and prompt so very well
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Bravo Kim, you did a great job writing to the painting … loved the poem, it gave me a sense of passing time but also serenity … a great combo!
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Thank you, Georgia !
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Very Welcome Kim! BTW the Renga at CDHK has started again and I think it’s your turn.
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Hi Georgia! I just got up and am on my way over to the Renga to get some inspiration from your handiwork!
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Yeah! And I hope you rengaed happily!
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BTW the link page is on the left had side of the post again.
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