My response to dVerse Poetics – Sentiments of the Southwest
Living on this small,
waterlogged
island,
thousands of miles
from America’s Southwest,
North Norfolk skies
are expansive and wide,
dramatic skyscapes
painted in colours of storms
and summertime.
I try to picture abundant rolling hills
while standing on flatland –
no prairies but fields of wheat,
corn and sugarbeet –
where the horizon is ever present,
broken only by a windmill or stone church.
Ancient forests we have,
of English oak, beech and birch.
Our rugged shores are rapidly disappearing,
crumbling
into the stormy North Sea.
We too have lakes and rivers,
lifeblood of the Norfolk Broads.
But I can only imagine
lonesome rocky deserts,
cactuses and cowboys
on a dusty trail,
and on my tongue those names,
Arizona, Colorado,
Texas, Utah and New Mexico,
are charms and spells
learnt in geography lessons,
names I know so well,
somewhere in the distance,
on the other side of the world.
© Kim M. Russell, 2016
Photograph of desert by Mish / Photograph of North Norfolk fields my own
So true… there are similarities but also differences… For me you have captured the similarities in the vastness of the sky.. the horizons…
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Thanks for the comment, Bjorn. It would be lovely to experience the desert but I am allergic to extreme heat. I prefer cold places!
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I really like the point you have made here so eloquently. Norfolk seems to compare more to the environment that I actually live in. I could especially relate to flatland and “dramatic skyscapes
painted in colours of storms and summertime.”
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Thank you, Mish!
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You really should visit the SW in winter, when the heat is tolerable, the Grand Canyon, Monument Valley, Mesa Verde, all there waiting for you. Your description of your home is incredibly good, & the poem is sterling.
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Thanks Glenn, your comments are important to me.
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Beautifully emotive write Kim ❤ ❤
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Thank you, Sanaa 😊
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I really like your take on the prompt. We tend to forget that the view from afar is blurred by distance. What is so familiar to us, it’s sights and smells and air on our skin, must be experienced in your imagination, as yours in our imaginations.
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Great comparison of your own homelands and the Southwest.
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Thank you, Linda.
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This has a wistful feel to it. Almost as if we wish we could be everywhere at once sometimes.
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Sometimes it feels like we have to!
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Yes it does!
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Love the ‘cowboys and cactus’ line! Thanks for sharing the beautiful descriptions of your home, as well.
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Thank you for reading 😊
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I like how you have painted the contrast and similarities between the home you know and that which remains unknown except in photo and words. My favorite lines
painted in colours of storms
and summertime
Like you, in reverse, I wish I could experience your part of the world.
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🙂
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I think we all have an appreciation for the uniqueness of our cities and landscapes ~ Love the description of your skies, shores and ancient forests ~ We should try and write about your city and places one time, smiles ~
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I have written and posted quite a number of poems about Norfolk, several about Norwich and some about London, where I grew up. I am very fond of Norfolk. 🙂
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Love the last two lines. You highlight the beauty of your own home while still expressing your desire to see other places.
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The desire to see new places never leaves.
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Love those names on your tongue (let’s add my Nevada to the list). 😉
And THIS:
“painted in colours of storms
and summertime.”
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Thanks, De! Do you live near a desert?
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Very well done! Isn’t that the way? Those names of places we hear about — maybe see pictures of — and we wonder what it would be like to be there? They’re far off — but we think, maybe…. some day….
I enjoyed this very much!
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Thank you, Lillian 🙂
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